Not sure about page flow assistance, as it flows fairly well, but you're going to have a hard time finding where to put speech bubbles. If you're going to have them, of course.

first, I must say I really like it. second.. H+G looks like A+B to me . third- I approach page "flow" as just overall composition.. look at some classic comics, once again, for an idea of how this works. I don't think you have too many issues there, but it could be different as it becomes more finished. But yea, overall composition is the same for a comic page as it is for a painting or a drawing, it should use implied lines and form/repetition to draw the viewer where you want them to go. subtle implied lines in a comic page = super WIN. but i like it alot ^.^ goooood luuuck!

*hump* Vosseller loves that repetition. I miss him. I miss that class. I miss you more. come do me, artist style.

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